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?問題分析型作文模版

?Part One : The Model of Beginning Paragraph

1. Last (week/ month), I visited a friend of mine and found that ------- . The (case/story/incident) is not rare. It has now drawn much nationwide attention to the issue/problem of ------------.

We may trace this problem back to --------, but it does not answer the question of why---------.

2. Perhaps nothing is more (dominant/popular/important/harmful/dangerous )in (the modern world/Chinese family/school/society) than --------. According to a recent(study/investigation/poll)80% teenagers (people/women) are (addicted to/indulged in /interested in) doing--------.

True, it does some good to us, but when we applaud its benefits, we must acknowledge its enormous potential to affect us.

Part Two: The Model of the Body paragraph

1.分析原因: In my opinion, the (phenomenon/problem/failure/change) in ------ (is partly.../ mainly /largely attributable to.../due to.../owing to....) --------.

The fact that ------ has several factors. First,------. Second, ------. Finally, -----

2. 分析結果: It is important for people /teenagers to realize that------- ,for it? will( produce/ exert/have)a remarkable (impact/influence/effect) on---------. First of all, -------. Also,-------. Finally,--------.

Part Three; The Model of Concluding　Paragraph

1.There is(no denying/little doubt)that (special/adequate/considerable/further)attention must be paid/called/devoted to the problem of --------.If we ignore/fall in/ are blind to the problem, it is very likely that ---------.

2. We must look for /search for/call for an immediate attention/action/method/measure because the present/current situation/state of ---------.

3. It is suggested/ recommended/hoped that great /persistent/contiuous efforts should be made to halt/ control/check the danger of-------. Anyhow, wider education/ more publicity should be given to the serious consequences/ effects of ---------. Only by recognizing/ realizing the -------, necessity/importance/dangerous effect of ----- can we-----.

提供論據,證明自己的觀點: ------contribute both to --------and to -------. Besides,------offers -------. And most importantly, ------help to promote --------.

結論: -----plays a vital role in people's life, and it deserves further attention from(the government/ authorities).

?Model Five: 引言: Ever since early this century. 提出自己的論點: ------ has become an essential part of our modern life. It has played a decisive role in modern (industry/agriculture/science and technology/natural defense and education). Nobody can deny that the development of our civilization depends on---------.

提供論據,證明自己的觀點:? If there were no --------, our modern world would be in trouble. For one thing,---------. For another,--------.

結論: Therefore, we should make better use of -------.