中考英語(yǔ)作文范例:溫泉讓我得到休息
來(lái)源:滬江英語(yǔ)
2010-12-13 07:20
題目:請(qǐng)以“Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest”為題,寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的作文。
Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest
溫泉讓我得到休息
We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!" I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring. One step,two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.
我們脫下外套,快速奔向檸檬泉,當(dāng)我第一次把腳伸進(jìn)水中時(shí),我大聲喊道:“哇,水是熱的!”我一開(kāi)始不知道水如此熱,所以我有點(diǎn)兒擔(dān)心會(huì)被熱水燙到。于是,我小心翼翼地走進(jìn)溫泉,一步,兩步......我能感覺(jué)到熱量慢慢地進(jìn)入我的身體。
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