注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 建設(shè)綠色校園很重要

2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境......

3. 為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該......

Creating a Green Campus

審題謀篇

本次四級(jí)作文主題為"綠色校園"，這是一個(gè)看似簡(jiǎn)單普通的話題，寫起來卻不是那么容易。因?yàn)楹芏嗫忌鷮?duì)于"綠色校園"所表達(dá)的內(nèi)涵感覺比較生僻。假如對(duì)"綠色校園"這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進(jìn)行分析以獲取對(duì)"綠色校園"這一概念的相關(guān)信息。

根據(jù)作文提示2，可以看出此處的"綠色校園"指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構(gòu)成的校園綠色風(fēng)景，也不僅僅指對(duì)校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護(hù)，而是指一種環(huán)境保護(hù)的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng)，以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會(huì)績(jī)效。在深入理解概念的基礎(chǔ)上，考生還應(yīng)對(duì) "綠色校園"的重要性進(jìn)行剖析，這時(shí)，考生可以從多個(gè)角度組織素材，比如從校園的環(huán)境問題出發(fā)，進(jìn)而擴(kuò)展到師生的環(huán)境意識(shí)對(duì)"綠色校園"所產(chǎn)生的長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)意義以及為未來環(huán)境改善所做的貢獻(xiàn)。最后是闡述建設(shè)"綠色校園"所要采取的措施。

需要注意的就是作文給分的重點(diǎn)在于考生如何用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言詞匯表達(dá)自己的思想觀點(diǎn)。而不是寫得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三個(gè)自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，重點(diǎn)突出，就可以了。

參考范文

　　Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining "a green earth" being the focus of the society, "green campus" has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.

The concept of "green campus" does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people's mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of "green campus" will definitely produce a profound effect on students' various environmental protection activities after their graduation. What's more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.

To make "green campus" come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for people's awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that "green campus" can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.

建設(shè)綠色校園

近來，隨著建設(shè)并保持"綠色地球"的觀念成為社會(huì)關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，"綠色校園"也成為校園里流行的話題。這無疑會(huì)給我們的校園和社會(huì)帶來長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的利益。

"綠色校園"不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境，還包括人們頭腦中的環(huán)境意識(shí)。學(xué)校在培養(yǎng)年輕一代上起著關(guān)鍵作用，"綠色校園"的意識(shí)必定會(huì)對(duì)學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)產(chǎn)生長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)影響。更為重要的是，年輕一代面臨著嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境污染，有太多問題等待他們?nèi)ソ鉀Q。

為使"綠色校園"成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，首先應(yīng)該制定出可持續(xù)發(fā)展、可長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展的有效政策。其次，還需要人們對(duì)環(huán)境污染的嚴(yán)肅性有正確認(rèn)識(shí)并采取實(shí)際行動(dòng)切實(shí)減少污染。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強(qiáng)學(xué)校和社會(huì)的聯(lián)系以便在全社會(huì)的共同努力下使"綠色校園"順利實(shí)施。

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