英文求職信不好的結尾修正，大家可以學習一下，不要犯同樣的錯誤。
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　　1、(a)軟弱、羞怯的：If you think Ican fill the position after you have read my letter,I shall be glad to talk with you.讀完此信后倘您認為敝人可補缺，敝人愿和您一談。?
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　　(b)改寫后(較佳)：If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you,I should welcome the opportunity to talk 　with you,so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.?
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　　2、(a)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：If you're interested,let me know immediately,as I'm sure and interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.倘貴公司有興趣，請即告知，敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信，敝人適合擔任此職。?
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　　(b)改寫后：May Ihave an interview?You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 5：30-9： evening.可否賜予面談?您可在每天上午七至九時，下午五時半至九時電884525號。?
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　　3、陳腐的句子：Hoping you will give me an interview,I am…(我希望您惠予面談)Anticipating afavorable decision,I wait your…(等候您的佳音)Trusting your reply will be satisfactory,I remain(靜候滿意的答復)?
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　　4、哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時間)：Won't you please give me the chance to interview your?I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781.懇請惠予面談。請打電話K-69781?
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　　(b)改寫后：May Ihave the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you?My telephone is Kenmore 69781.You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.可否惠予面談以便進一步商討?我的電話是K-69781。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。?
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　　5、太過自信的句子：I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430.我深信面談可以證實我的話。您可在每天下午二至四時(星期二例外)打731430號電話通知我。?
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　　6、較具體有效的句子。May Ihave an interview?My residence telephone is(042)4398.You reach me by calling that number until June 30.After July 2,my address will be Kent House,Bretton Woods,New Hampshire.可否惠予面談?我住處電話為43981號。六月三十日以前我都在上址，七月二日以后，我的新址為新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。?