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話題：

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Sore shoulder
A sore shoulder means discomfort is felt in the shoulder. Who has a sore shoulder? What is the cause of the soreness? What can be done to relieve the discomfort?
This week's topic: They had sore shoulders... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) massaging sore shoulders
2) sore shoulders from sitting for too long
3) using a hot pack on a sore shoulder
4) carrying a heavy bag for too long, resulting in sore shoulders
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1：

Of course he was not really sore; he was not on the ground for that long, besides, he was more physically fit than that. He just wanted to look like he was having sore shoulders. While doing so, he casually glanced around the office, now seeing it in a different light. He was no longer looking at the room from the pure perspective of an interior designer. He spotted several spots which would be a good place to put a bug. He turned towards the painting hanging on the back wall.?

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