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話題:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Visible
Visible means something could be seen. What is visible? Why is it visible? What conditions are needed for visibility?
This week's topic: They knew it was visible... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) the watermark became visible under blacklight
2) the aircraft information was visible on the radar screen
3) thunderstorm clouds are visible in the distant sky
4) visible danger
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

For Al, he did not like hanging out in cold places. His cup of tea would be a fancy dinner at a high-end restaurant. Great food in a great setting was the way to go. Al kept that thought in mind as he looked into the camera of the photographer. A warm heart in the cold weather as the main concept of the photoshoot. With an onyx crystal hanging on this neck, covered by his shirt and jacket, only a tiny section of the chain peeking out near the collar, not visible to the lens of the camera.

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