but those of who hoped, with kolb, that kolb's newly published complete edition of proust's correspondence for 1909 would document the process in greater detail are disappointed. (4)

但是我們當中的那些希望(也算上k本人)k新出版的p1909年書信的全集能夠更加詳細的記錄下這一過程的人都大失所望。

難句類型：

復雜修飾、插入語

解釋：

本句中從句套從句，致使主語those of us與謂語的距離很遠，而且中間的成分又極多，使得句子很難讀懂。修飾主語those of us的定語從句who hoped之中又套了一個賓語從句，賓語從句的主語complete edition又被一前一后的兩個定語所修飾，之后才依次是賓語從句的謂語、賓語：主句的系動詞、表語。

意群訓練：

but those of us who hoped, with kolb, that kolb's newly published complete edition of proust's correspondence for 1909 would document the process in greater detail are disappointed.