【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思寫作】犯罪類真題7分范文二
來源:滬江聽寫酷
2013-07-04 20:00
犯罪類真題
【Some?people?think?to?lower?the?crime?rate,?criminals?should?be?given?longer?terms?in?prison.?What?is?your?opinion?】
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The soaring crime rate has led to the proposal that criminals should be sentenced to longer periods in prison.
Keeping the offenders in prison may help to prevent crimes from happening to some extent. If the penalties for crimes were not harsh enough, we would have a high rate of criminals repeating their acts. It is mainly through jail time that the offenders are forced to think about their unlawful acts and then become law-abiding citizens again. In this sense, prisons may help to make criminals less dangerous.
However, concerns about the possible harm caused by lengthy jail terms are not unfounded. Severe punishments might ruin offenders' future, both physically and psychologically. For instance, there may a high chance that first-time offenders and those who are charged with a minor crime will be abused by felons who have been in jail for a long time, which may make these victims even more violent than before when they are released from prison. What is also needed therefor is treatment that helps criminals recover and function better in society. A more effective prison system should be established to reform criminals by providing them with job training and counseling.
So, my conclusion is that a certain degree of restriction of criminals freedom is an efficient method to change them. But to make sure that they can be changed in a positive way, a longer time in prison is not necessarily the right way and it is rarely the only way.
不斷瘋狂攀高的犯罪率使得人們開始提議是否應(yīng)該延長罪犯在監(jiān)獄里的服刑時間。
將罪犯留在監(jiān)獄的確會在防止犯罪行為上起到一定程度的作用。如果我們對罪犯懲罰過輕的話,就會刺激罪犯不斷地重復(fù)他們的罪行。而罪犯們主要通過在監(jiān)獄中服刑來反省自身的罪行,并最終轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槭胤ǖ牧济瘛K詮倪@方面來看,監(jiān)獄會使罪犯變得不那么危險。
但是,也有人對過長的服刑時間會帶來的可能的害處產(chǎn)生了憂慮。過于嚴重的刑罰會在身心兩方面毀掉違法者的未來。例如,那些因為初犯一些小錯而入獄的罪犯可能會被那些入獄時間較長的獄霸欺侮,從而導(dǎo)致他們在出獄后反而被鍛煉得更為暴力??磥砦覀冞€需要找到幫助那些罪犯在社會中能更好融入并作出貢獻的方法。而監(jiān)獄系統(tǒng)就應(yīng)該通過提供工作培訓(xùn)和咨詢服務(wù)來肩負起這個責(zé)任。
所以我的結(jié)論就是在一定程度上限制罪犯的自由是個能幫助他們改過的有效方法。但是要保證他們能夠在將來改變成一個更好的人,過長時間的服刑并不是一個必須的方法,更不是唯一的方法。
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