Introduction

思路拓展讓步式開頭，引出中心論點(diǎn)：如今的年輕人對世界做出的貢獻(xiàn)更為重要→延伸論點(diǎn)：年輕人具備什么樣的條件

中心論點(diǎn)

Every generation of young people has had its champions(支持者)for improving living conditions, and making the worldaround them a better place; however, young people todayare playing more crucial roles in making great contribution andbringing real evolution to the world.

延伸論點(diǎn)

Young people now have the time, the inclination(意向), themeans and the education to help their communitiesthroughoutthe world.

Essay Body

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思路拓展本段論點(diǎn)：現(xiàn)在的年輕人通過先進(jìn)的技術(shù)更多地融入世界→解釋中心論點(diǎn)，層層遞進(jìn)→舉例→總結(jié)

本段論點(diǎn)

First, young people now are actively getting involved inwhat goes on around them and contribute more to the worldbecause of advances in technology.

解釋論點(diǎn)

When browsing any form of web media or online socialnetworks, it’s easy to see how young people have beengetting more involved in social causes and exchanging theirideas more freely than in the past.

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大部分考生表達(dá)“如果上網(wǎng)瀏覽就不難發(fā)現(xiàn)……”時(shí)，往往會用if you surf online, you would… 這種“地球人都知道”的表達(dá)方式，老外會怎樣表達(dá)？請參考本句。

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舉例

For example, social media such as Facebook has changedhow we meet and stay in touch with people by providing aplatform to discover people who share the same interests. Anda Twitter search will likely turn up other people talking aboutthe same subject as you.

結(jié)論

By these new means, it is easier for young people today togaininsight into domestic and international affairs, share their ideas,encourage each other, as well as organize activities and spreadtheir messages to bring about changes in the world.

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思路拓展本段論點(diǎn)：世界各地越來越多的年輕人為保護(hù)環(huán)境和野生動物而奮戰(zhàn)→解釋論點(diǎn)→舉例→總結(jié)：現(xiàn)在的很多年輕人在為這個世界更美好而奉獻(xiàn)力量

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本段論點(diǎn)

Furthermore, more and more young people today are fightingfor environmental and wild animal preservation all over theworld.

解釋論點(diǎn)

We can see them sacrificing their time to help protect ourenvironment via media such as Discovery Channel.

舉例

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I once heard about a young woman environmentalist wholived alone on an island in the East Indian Ocean for overfive years, conducting her research on the negative impact ofenvironmental changes on sea animals and thus calling forimmediate action from the government.

結(jié)論

This is just one example that shows how youth are indeedgiving their time and energy to improve the world.

Conclusion

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思路拓展再次闡明中心論點(diǎn)→總結(jié)：很多年輕人在積極參與社會活動

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重申中心論點(diǎn)

I would definitely agree that young people are more involved in making the world a better place now than in the past.

總結(jié)全文

Instead of immediately settling down, getting married, or investing their time in a career, many graduates are actively participating in important parts of their society by the Internet and devoting a lot of time and energy to social causes like environmental preservation.