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背景介紹：

烈性犬傷人事件頻出，相關(guān)管理部門亦難辭其咎。這其后暴露除了諸多法律、行政法規(guī)方面的問題。而“城市內(nèi)飼養(yǎng)烈性犬大型犬”這一話題又被推至風(fēng)口浪尖。

話題：

就此，你有什么見解和看法？Give your comments to it.

范例1：

I am the dog guy. So in my mind, dog is not only a pet but also a member of my family. He just like the kids in our home who needs more care and more attention especially taking him out for a walk. Although human being deserves all rights he should have, it have to build on the base that he does not harm the other's. Keeping fierce dogs means adding uncertain security problems on your neighbor or you need to give most attention to them than the other mild dogs.

At the same time, many people are calling on that the fierce dogs and large-scale dogs should not be kept on the busy streets. As for this, I think, fierce dogs need to be forbidden for the reason that they has more aggressivity, while the large-scale dogs should be given severe supervision other than be forbidden. Because not all the large-scale dogs are aggressive and even some of them can give some kinds of help to blind people.

范例2：

The point of keeping a dog, from my perspective, is not whether it is right or not but how to keep it. In China it is a common phenomenon that not using rope to control the dog and dog-droppings when the master is walking his lovely, dear pet. From every detail, the resident quality can be demonstrated, which means that uncivilized behavior is evidence that Chinese spiritual civilization still needs to be promoted. In China, the keepers do not really like dogs: they eat hot dog-pot, which is unbelievable to the foreigners because in the contrast to the Chinese they virtually treat pets like their family members but they also remember to do some measures to prevent their dogs from biting others and protect the atmosphere they live. Hence, all can be concluded that there is a long way for Chinese to reconstruct their civilization quality, to retrieve what they lost in the Great Culture Revolution which is a culture faultage to China.

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