2013年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文高分版

Keep Our Hearts Strong

As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone. Good habits help pave our way to success. However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us. Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success.

In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined. A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society. Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust. In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits. We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment. Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence.

In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations. With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】：
本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的習(xí)慣源自抵制誘惑”，這一諺語(yǔ)為話題發(fā)表議論，在寫作時(shí)需要對(duì)諺語(yǔ)的寓意進(jìn)行闡釋，并且表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法，相比更為常見(jiàn)的話題型和觀點(diǎn)型作文題來(lái)說(shuō)，有一定的難度。首先要求能夠?qū)χV語(yǔ)進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確的理解，抓住諺語(yǔ)表達(dá)的中心意思，明確的提出觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這個(gè)意思進(jìn)行闡述。所以在寫作時(shí)需要強(qiáng)調(diào)抵制誘惑對(duì)于保持或者培養(yǎng)良好習(xí)慣的重要性，以這一論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開闡述，注意行文的邏輯性和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確、流暢。

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