六、 多變句式原則?

1)加法(串聯(lián))?
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎么辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and,?但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說:?
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:?
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短語可以用:?
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)?
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點,然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。?
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短語:?
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)?
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然后我主動搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!?
The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短語:?
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)?
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。?
舉例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:?
When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一舉)?
如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。?
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構(gòu)成;定語從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that?關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。?

6)排比(排山倒海句)?
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達(dá)將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!?
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.?
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.?(氣勢恢宏)?
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!?

七、 挑戰(zhàn)極限原則?
既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!?
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領(lǐng)會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:?
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!

文章主體段落三大殺手锏:?

一、舉實例?
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!?
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型:?
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比較?
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;?
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(through comparison)和不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:?
相似的比較:?
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:?
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

三、換言之?
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。?
實際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實際上就三個字?I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.

或者上面我們舉過的例子:?
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語:in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

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