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第四部分寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)

短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題I分，滿分10分)

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文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little?aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.

答案：

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and?little（改為less）?aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy（改為toys）. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did（改為 went） wrong, I got angry and broke it（改為them）. For a while （^my）parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which（改為what）?was happening. When I tear（改為tore） apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to（改為for） you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must（改為could/might） make my toys to（去掉to） last My attitude changed from then on.