Foreigner‘s Chinese Composition Amuses Chinese Netizens
老外的漢語(yǔ)作文樂(lè)壞中國(guó)網(wǎng)友

A photograph of a foreigner’s beginner’s Mandarin composition has (probably unbeknownst to him) been uploaded to popular Chinese microblogging service Sina Weibo and is currently being gleefully forwarded by Chinese netizens, having already been shared 3,000 times and with over 600 comments. The original uploader comments:Is this how laowai feel when they see our English compositions…?
上面是一位初學(xué)漢語(yǔ)的老外的作文。自這張照片上傳至新浪微博（也許他本人還并不知曉此事）以來(lái)，中國(guó)的網(wǎng)友迅速轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)，目前已分享 3000多次，有超過(guò)600條的評(píng)論。上傳者的評(píng)語(yǔ)是：“難道老外看到我們英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)也有著相同的感受嗎？”

Netizens are finding the lack of grammatical errors impressive, despite the simplicity of the content, and especially appreciate the pithy conclusion.Translation of the composition:
除了內(nèi)容淺顯，網(wǎng)友們并沒(méi)有發(fā)現(xiàn)明顯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，尤其對(duì)簡(jiǎn)潔的結(jié)尾大為贊賞。文章原文如下：

上個(gè)周末，小力給小白打了一個(gè)電話請(qǐng)她一起出去吃晚飯。因?yàn)樾“讗?ài)小力，所以她很高興。他們?nèi)チ诵“鬃钕矚g的飯館。到那兒以后他們就有了一張桌子，點(diǎn)了一 些菜，雖然小白很喜歡青菜，不過(guò)她不是素食主義者。小白點(diǎn)了一盤(pán)家常豆腐，還點(diǎn)了兩盤(pán)牛肉。小力點(diǎn)了兩碗米飯和一碗酸辣湯。服務(wù)員上菜上得真快。
Last weekend, Xiao Li gave Xiao Bai a phone call to invite her out to eat dinner. Because Xiao Bai loves Xiao Li, she was very happy. They went to Xiao Bai's favorite restaurant. When they arrived, they got a table and ordered some food. Although Xiao Bai really likes cabbage, she isn't a vegetarian. Xiao Bai ordered a plate of Homestyle Tofu, as well as two plates of beef. Xiao Li ordered two bowls of rice and one bowl of spicy-sour soup. The server brought the food very quickly.

吃完飯以后小力想付錢(qián)，但是他有一個(gè)大問(wèn)題。他忘了帶錢(qián)！現(xiàn)在他一塊錢(qián)都沒(méi)有。小力很不好意思，他讓小白付錢(qián)?，F(xiàn)在小白不愛(ài)小力了。
After they finished eating, Xiao Li wanted to pay the bill, but had a large problem. He forgot to bring money! Right now he does not even have one yuan. Xiao Li is very embarrassed. He let Xiao Bai pay. Right now Xiao Bai does not love Xiao Li.

In the lower right corner, the teacher remarks:"Excellent!"
在右下角處，老師給的評(píng)語(yǔ)是：“真棒！”