The first written communication to the dean of college admissions will be your application. Writing your application is a major opportunity to distinguish yourself—to document your clarity, creativity, and competence. Let me tell you why. Your college applications can be as creative as your essay. College admissions deans read thousands of applications, so yours has to stand out.
你的申請是你和大學招生官之間第一次書面交流,寫申請是證明你思想清楚,有創(chuàng)造性,有競爭力,讓你自己脫穎而出的一個主要機會。讓我來告訴你為什么如此。你的大學申請可以像你的論文一樣有創(chuàng)造性,大學招生官經(jīng)常要讀數(shù)千份申請,所以你必須得讓你的申請很出色才行。

The dean is looking for a freshman class that provides the college with high energy leadership in intellectual curiosity, publications, music, student government, athletics, creative thinking, and the arts. The dean is reading your application to evaluate if you are going to be a good match for his college and provide his community with any of those leadership categories he is seeking. Let’s take a closer look at the steps you must take in preparing your applications.
招生官正在尋找在求知欲,出版,音樂,學生會,體育,創(chuàng)造性思維,藝術(shù)等領(lǐng)域可以給大學提供領(lǐng)導力的學生。招生官正在通過你的申請來評估你是否配得上他們學校,是否能給他的社區(qū)帶來他正在尋找的領(lǐng)導力。讓我們近距離看看你在準備你的申請之前必須做的步驟。

寫作你的申請

When you look at the various applications that you have to complete, you’re likely to think that it looks time consuming and very boring to fill in all of those questions over and over again. It certainly doesn’t look like the document that is going to get you in—and that’s my point! Here’s your chance to get an edge on those thousands of dull applications that all look alike and that the deans fall asleep reading. And here’s how: You are going to be creative with that boring application. There are a lot of places on an application where you can distinguish yourself. One rule is not to leave anything blank. If a question is not relevant, draw a little line in the space, so the dean knows you saw the question.
當你看到幾種你必須完成的申請,你很可能會認為這是浪費時間,一遍又一遍地填寫各種問題太乏味了。申請當然不像那些能吸引你的文件。這是你在數(shù)千份看起來很像、招生官讀起來會昏昏欲睡的申請材料中脫穎而出的一個機會。你將通過一份乏味的申請來展現(xiàn)自己的創(chuàng)造性。在一份申請里有很多地方可以使你脫穎而出。有一個規(guī)則是不讓任何地方空著,如果有一個問題不恰當?shù)?,畫一條線在空格處,這樣招生官會知道你注意到這個問題了。

The question the college is trying to get at here is how you spend your time outside of school work. The dean wants to know about your leadership and involvement, and how much time you spend in that activity. Take the time to figure it out. American college deans are always trying to measure character. Looking at how you spend your time and what you value gives them their measure of you.
在這里,大學想知道的是你在校外是如何使用你的時間的,招生官想知道你的領(lǐng)導能力,組織能力,你花費了多少時間在課外活動上?;c時間把這些描述出來吧。美國大學招生官經(jīng)常會評估申請者的性格。你如何使用自己的時間和你所看重的東西會讓他們對你有所考量。

If you have a passion for theatre rather than fill in all the columns as found on the application, use that space to do your own thing: Write a few sentences describing the roles you played and the plays you were in. When you are writing about your activities, think about what message you are giving. You’re good? How good? You run? How fast? You play? What level of music do you play? How much time did you spend in sports, on publications, in the performing arts? Specifics are what you are after. Which position do you play and how good is the team? How many goals did you score? You write? Where were you published? Has your school paper won any national awards? Specificity is what is needed to show how you stand out from all the other qualified applicants.
如果你對劇院有熱情而不是填滿申請上的各種類別,那么,用那些地方去做你自己的事情吧:寫幾句話,描述你曾經(jīng)參演的劇目的角色。當你寫下你的課外活動的時候,要考慮這些活動會給出什么信息。你好么?如何好?你能跑么?跑得快么?你演奏樂器么?你可以演奏那種水平的音樂?你花費多少時間在體育運動上,在出版物上,在表演藝術(shù)上?細節(jié)是你在追求什么?你處于哪種地位?你的團隊有多好?你實現(xiàn)了多少目標?你寫東西么?在哪里發(fā)表過?你的校報贏得過國家級的獎項么?重點是,如果你想從符合資格的其他學生中脫穎而出,什么是必需的。

Use the application to write what you are crazy about, and something you haven’t written about in your essay. In other words, use the application questions as guidelines, not as rigid categories where you have to put exactly what they ask for.Tune in next week with more on writing the application. In the meantime, send in your application questions and any college admissions questions to blog address.
利用申請寫下你為了什么瘋狂,寫下你在論文中沒有提及的東西。換句話說,要把那些申請問題當成指南,而不是當成別人要求的、你必須填寫的刻板的分類。以后我會寫更多關(guān)于申請的東西。同時,如果你有關(guān)于申請寫作問題和關(guān)于大學申請的問題,請發(fā)到我的博客上。