1、不要再用 more and more了；該詞組被評(píng)為中國(guó)惡俗詞組榜第一??！老師說(shuō)可以用a growing number of..?

2、inevitable——不可避免

3、should/would/could/may/might；為什么要用這個(gè)5個(gè)詞？首先，語(yǔ)氣比較委婉，不會(huì)很肯定，顯的謙虛；其次，可以不考慮動(dòng)詞的形式；所以這五個(gè)詞被稱為最賤的詞。

4、physically beneficial——身體健康；副詞+形容詞的表達(dá)方式，比較好看。

5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous——舉世聞名

7、開頭方法一：

Background

Controversy (2 different/opposite ideas)

As/Being a controversial issue.... ? ? ?作為有爭(zhēng)議的問(wèn)題....

Now days， the issue on....is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person——不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)。（不要用different people）

Some would claim....，while some others may suggest....—— 一些人認(rèn)為....另一些人認(rèn)為....

Some would claim....，while the idea....is still held by some others. ——Idea倒裝，句子更好看。不能用some或者the other，這樣只有兩種可能性，太一定。

8、5個(gè)常用單詞的替代

Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose
Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive
Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative
Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro
Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost

9、few 0-1 幾乎沒(méi)有
A few 一些，不多 <5
Several 若干 <10

10、贊成某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)
As for me，I side with the fomer/latter

中立觀點(diǎn)
As far as I am concerned, I believe both views have their own merits and con coexit

11、like a double-edged sword 雙刃劍

12、sth. can be neither absolutely perfect nor purely harmful

13、末段（總結(jié)）

All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum up

When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that … (主要用來(lái)湊字?jǐn)?shù))

14、On one hand.... contribute greatly to....
On the other hand/On the contrary/

15、in contrast，the demerits of....can not be ignored.

16、作文重點(diǎn)，其實(shí)就是不能重復(fù)；不要用一些惡俗的詞，people等；少用第一和第二人稱；多變幻句式；少用主動(dòng)句；注意符號(hào)；