四、培養(yǎng)途徑

　　1.根據(jù)老師布置的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，獨(dú)立完成一篇寫(xiě)作。

　　2.與同伴合作，交流自己的寫(xiě)作，通過(guò)交流找出各自作文中寫(xiě)得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子，合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。

　　3.找老師點(diǎn)評(píng)，請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn)，尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。

　　4.自己糾錯(cuò)，寫(xiě)下反思。

五、備考演練

????? A

　　縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的變化。

　　寫(xiě)作要求：

　　1.詞數(shù)在100左右。

　　2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順。

　　3.開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

　　B

　　閱讀電視廣告詞：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞的短文。

　　提示：

　　1.生活離不開(kāi)水。

　　2.可飲用水在減少。

　　3.水污染嚴(yán)重。

　　4.應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水。

　　思路點(diǎn)撥與參考答案

　　A. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：

　?、傥捏w：記敘文。

　?、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫(xiě)作手法，增加感染力。

　?、蹖?xiě)作目的：告訴讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。

　　Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

　　B. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：

　?、賷A敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。

　　②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

　　③廣告詞的含義——水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫(xiě)作意圖)。

　　Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.