專八改錯練習(xí)第七篇:

You will think about what kind of saving instru- __1__
ment to use or what kind of investment to make. By
putting your money in some kind of savings instrument
or investment, you can set aside small amount of mon- __2__
ey regularly and the money will earn interest or divi-
dends. Interest refers to the amount what your money__3__
earns when it is kept in a savings instrument. Divi-
dends are payments of part of a company’s earnings to
people hold stock in the company. A savings instru- __4__
ment has an “interest rate ” associated with it; this re-
fers to the rate which the money in the instrument in- __5__
creases during a certain period of time. Principal re-
fers to the facial value or the amount of money you __6__
place in the savings instrument on which the interest is
earned.
Every type of savings or investment has some risk
that the return will be less than needed or expected.
Federally insured savings accounts are safe and guar-
anteed up to $100,000 by the U.S. Government.
Therefore, they may have lower interest rates, making __7__
it hard to save large amounts of money for college. __8__
Bonds and stocks often have higher returns than sav-
ings accounts or EE saving bonds but are more riskier. __9__
You can reduce the risks of these kinds of investments
by starting to save early. The earlier we begin the less __10__
money you will have to put aside each month and the
more total savings you will accumulate.

參考答案及解析(反白可見):
1.把saving改為savings
saving表示“節(jié)約的”,和其復(fù)數(shù)形式savings意義不同。savings的意思是“存款,儲蓄”。
2.在small前面加上a
a small amount of 表示“少量的”,冠詞不可缺。
3.把what改為which或者that
amount在此是先行詞,后面是一個定語從句,這個從句顯然應(yīng)該由關(guān)系代詞that或者which引導(dǎo)。
4.在hold前面加who
先行詞people后面是一個定語從句,因此需要有引導(dǎo)詞。
5.在which前面加上at
關(guān)系代詞which在此引導(dǎo)的同樣是一個定語從句,并且在此應(yīng)該用“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”這個形式,因?yàn)榍懊娴膔ate往往用于短語at a rate,此處的介詞可以提前。
6.把facial改為face
票面價值應(yīng)是:face value。
7.把Therefore改為However。
此處根據(jù)上下文來看,表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折的含義,而不是因果關(guān)系。
8.把hard改為harder
這里存在一個隱含的比較,所以應(yīng)該用hard的比較級形式。
9.刪除more,或者把more改為much
riskier本身已經(jīng)是比較形式了,再加上more是多余的。把more改為much,表示一種程度也可以。
10.把we改為you

補(bǔ)充:
第二題將amount改為amounts也是正確的
第四題把hold改為holding也是正確的
a small amount of 和small amounts of 用法的區(qū)別
a large(great,good)amount of +不可數(shù)名詞,謂語動詞一般用單數(shù);但(large,great,good)amounts of + 不可數(shù)名詞,作主語時,謂語動詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。
A large amount of damage <has been>done by the earth quake.
Large amounts of money <were>spent on the bridge.
這就是為什么第二題也可以把a(bǔ)mount改為amounts而第八題不用改amount的原因啦.?