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A類小作文：

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題目：The charts below show the percentage of men and women working in different fields with different working duration in each week in the UK in 2014.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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解題思路：

本題為靜態(tài)圖，描述的是2014年男女在英國政府和私企的每周工作時(shí)長的情況。有四個(gè)餅狀圖，可以根據(jù)政府和私企的劃分兩兩組圖來寫。需要注意時(shí)態(tài)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。

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參考范文：

The pie charts compare the distribution of employed British men and women working over different hours bands in the government and private sectors over the year of 2014.?

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Overall, both sexes working in the private corporations spent more time in their work than the government officials. And the number of men in these two sectors working for more than 45 hours apparently outweighed that of the females.??

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In the government, there were 4% of the males dedicated more than 45 hours to their work while only 2% of the females tended to work over this hours band. The most common number of hours that both men and women worked was between 16-25 hours per week (55% for men and 40% for women). As for the situation where people worked in 1-15 hours, women represented 25%, going slightly over the males that accounted for 20%. In a similar pattern, the females working for 26-35 hours outnumbered their male counterparts by 5% (20% and 15% for each). It is also noticeable that the percentage of the female workers working for 36-45 hours was nearly twofold as much as that of the males.

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In the private company, both the males and the females devoted more hours to work. There were 20% of men and 15% of women working for 46 hours or more. For both sexes, the highest figure of working hours was between 26-35 hours. It is also worth pointing out that the percentages of males working for 36-45 hours and 1-15 hours were 5% higher than those of the females. In addition, the rate of men who spent 16-25 hours on their work was the same as that of women, representing 20%. ??????????

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重點(diǎn)表達(dá)：

①distribution: n.?? 分布，分配

②dedicate: v.?? 致力于，投入

③account for:? 占據(jù)

④outnumber: v. 數(shù)目超過

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李敏老師

滬江網(wǎng)校雅思教研老師，英國杜倫大學(xué)畢業(yè)；英文專業(yè)8級(jí)；高中英語教師資格證書等，主攻雅思托福等留學(xué)考試。參與滬江網(wǎng)校World English A2和 B1、新版雅思6.5分寫作、新版雅思7分寫作等課程的設(shè)計(jì)規(guī)劃與制作。

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A類大作文：

題目：When new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. Do you agree or disagree?

題型：同意與否

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話題：城市類

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解題思路：這道題問了有關(guān)城鎮(zhèn)建設(shè)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容：配套設(shè)施中，公園和運(yùn)動(dòng)器械是否比購物中心更重要？回答時(shí)首先要給出自己的明確觀點(diǎn)，然后從兩方面各自進(jìn)行說明和對(duì)比。由于這兩類設(shè)施并不矛盾沖突，因此在論述時(shí)要選擇其一進(jìn)行重點(diǎn)詳寫，體現(xiàn)出它的重要程度。

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參考范文：

When it comes to the construction of new towns and cities, disputes often arise whether to build public parks with sports facilities or shopping malls for the residents nearby. Some people are strongly for the gardens and athletic equipment, but I stand on the side of shopping malls.

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Undeniably, the green spaces in community gardens make the air cleaner and fresher, which is beneficial for dwellers’ health when living and exercising in such environment. Moreover, the possibility for one to do sports in their free time might be increased if the equipment is within easy reach. However, people nowadays are more likely to engage in indoor activities, due to weather conditions and living habits; plus the lack of proper maintenance and instructions for some outdoor public facilities, the plan always turns out to be deviated from expectation.

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In contrast, shopping centres seldom fail us in terms of their functions. Not only are supermarkets and chain stores set in the area, but also a variety of entertainment services, such as cinemas, restaurants, beauty salon and DIY-workshops. People can buy necessities with great convenience from a number of choices, or gather with friends and family to savour a delicious meal there. Life becomes more colourful and diversified thanks to such multi-functional malls. On a larger scale, such commercial centres play an indispensable role boosting the local economy. When starting a new business, the stores and restaurants often require staff for managing, selling and cleaning, which creates many job opportunities for the residents nearby. If well managed, the shopping centre can develop and form its own style, attracting visitors from other places, along with a flow of financial income to the business and government as a whole.

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To conclude, while public parks and sports facilities are very desirable for a new town, the benefits they bring us are somehow too ideal rather than realistic. However, it is the shopping centre that ensures a tangible outcome for both the individuals and the government in the local area.

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重點(diǎn)表達(dá)：

①dispute: n. ??爭(zhēng)論，爭(zhēng)執(zhí)

②maintenance: n.?? 維護(hù)；保養(yǎng)

③be deviated from:????? 偏移

④fail: v. ???使失望；辜負(fù)

⑤savour: v. ???品味，享受

⑥diversified: adj.? ??多樣化的

⑦tangible : adj. ?????實(shí)際的

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本次機(jī)經(jīng)由以下滬江留學(xué)老師產(chǎn)出

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王倩竹老師

滬江網(wǎng)校留學(xué)資深教研老師，同濟(jì)大學(xué)英語語言文學(xué)碩士，主攻雅思托福等留學(xué)考試。參與滬江網(wǎng)?！堆潘急Ｆ邲_八》、Unlock A1-B2雅思能力課程、World English B1、新版雅思6.5分閱讀、新版雅思7分聽力等課程的設(shè)計(jì)規(guī)劃與制作，并幫助多名1V1學(xué)生達(dá)到雅思寫作7分。

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