段落一 描述圖畫

Sentence 1(描述圖畫):

描述圖畫一段中最為重要的亦是全文最關(guān)鍵的語句就是描述圖畫,我們不妨將描述圖畫這一句的核心內(nèi)容首先從圖中找出,核心內(nèi)容應(yīng)該涵蓋如下內(nèi)容:

①描述事物的名詞;②描述事物狀態(tài)的動(dòng)詞;③描述事物位置的介詞短語;④描述事物的形容詞;⑤描述事物特點(diǎn)的動(dòng)詞;⑥修飾動(dòng)詞內(nèi)容;⑦概括圖畫的名詞。

其中②處可以使用的動(dòng)詞主要以表存在的不及物動(dòng)詞為主,如:stand、stay、sit、run、lie、hang、float、crouch、appear等。

其中⑤處可以使用的動(dòng)詞主要以與事物直接相關(guān)的動(dòng)詞為主,如lamp與glow(2001),flower與bloom(2003),goalkeeper與guard(2007)等;但如果事物較為抽象或難于有具體動(dòng)作,如a traditional Chinese costume(2002),the name of Beckham(2006)等,則可使用如show,imply,indicate等表示意味的動(dòng)詞來拓展內(nèi)容。

以2009年為例,我們首先從2009年圖畫中找出如下詞匯:①net;②lie;③in the picture;④complex;⑤connect computers;⑥from all directions;⑦Internet

由此我們重新組合找出的詞匯并調(diào)整其順序,即可設(shè)計(jì)出如下的句式:

In the picture lies a net, a remarkably complex one, connecting computers from all directions.

之后我們?cè)贋榫涫皆O(shè)計(jì)輔助內(nèi)容,用以豐富句子內(nèi)容,其方式亦來自于大綱范文:

As is vividly depicted in the picture, in the picture lies a net, a remarkably complex one, connecting computers from all directions, a sight that brings about insights into the topic of Internet among people, especially those who are confronted with it.

句中標(biāo)注下劃線的內(nèi)容皆為輔助內(nèi)容,均可以類似內(nèi)容替換。如句首可替換為As we can see from the picture, 句尾可替換為a sight that gives thoughts to the topic of Internet among people, especially those who are concerned about it等。

如上設(shè)計(jì)出的句式已然可以滿足考研寫作的苛刻要求,然而我們還可以在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)一步拓展該句式,拓展方式則是從圖畫中找出另一個(gè)描述事物的名詞,再以相同方式寫作另一部分,進(jìn)而將兩部分內(nèi)容組合起來。由此我們?cè)O(shè)計(jì)如下結(jié)構(gòu):in correspondence to/contrast to/accordance with the ① scene that ④ ③ ②,⑤ ⑥。

其中①處為修飾場(chǎng)景的形容詞,主要以surprising、interesting、touching、confusing、thought-provoking等詞為主;其中②-⑥的選詞與上一部分的方式一致,而寫作句式的結(jié)構(gòu)也一致,從而詞匯范圍有重合,也或多或少省去了些選詞上的困擾。如2009年我們選出的詞分別為②a person;③sit;④against every computer in the net;⑤surf the Internet;⑥alone。

參考例句:As is vividly depicted in the picture, in the picture lies a net, a remarkably complex one, connecting computers from all directions, in correspondence to the interesting scene that against every computer in the net sits a person, surfing the Internet alone, a sight that brings about insights into the topic of internet among people, especially those who are confronted with it.

Sentence 2(概括寓意):

首段在描述圖畫之外的句子則只需對(duì)于圖畫的寓意(話題)做簡(jiǎn)要概括即可,因而在句式上也并沒有太多要求,而概括圖畫的寓意的內(nèi)容用詞主要如下:phenomenon、problem、trend、fashion、issue、a matter of fact、a matter of concern等。而輔助內(nèi)容則如下:

The picture aims at revealing a ① phenomenon: ②.

The notion conveyed in the picture is that ② is a ① phenomenon.

其中①為對(duì)于概括詞的修飾成分,多為如common、popular、severe、significant等詞;②則為對(duì)于寓意的簡(jiǎn)要概括。

參考例句:The picture aims at revealing a common and far-reaching issue: how Internet may change people's lives.