一、高分作文標(biāo)志:

1、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);

3、用詞是否多樣,準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

二、下面給出寫(xiě)好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):

1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀(guān)的反映事實(shí),句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we/I(比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )

舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so, its competitive edge will besharpened effectively.

2. 善于使用插入語(yǔ),比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however/therefore/for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說(shuō): Other individuals, however, take the attitude that...

3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad, many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)

比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替換enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)