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在托福培訓(xùn)中寫作是很重要的一部分，然而，作文的開頭又是決定高分得重中之重。今天小編就給大家介紹下托福寫作五大錯誤開頭。

一：中式英文人見人暈

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem。 For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there。

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world？

I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world。 For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage。 I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”。

二：廢話連篇不知所云

典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married？

This topic is very interesting。 I’m very interested in talking about this topic。 Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information？

Ok， this topic is a very good topic。 First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much。 Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games。 So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh， this topic is surely very important。 Isn’t it？ Of course！ It’s really very very important！

三：語法錯誤慘不忍睹

典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly， should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished？

About this problem， my think is if children behave badly， then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parent’s responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

四：觀點模糊態(tài)度曖昧

典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married？

I think this topic is very hard to say。 Because I am still very little， only 17， and not married， so this topic is very difficult for me……

五：偏離主題無軌電車

典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education。 To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？

I think to success， we must have a lot of important qualities。 To have these important qualities， we must learn a lot of things， for example， English， music tools， and etc。 We can learn these qualities from our teachers， our friends and from books。 All in all， we can learn from many places。

以上就是小編為大家分享的托福寫作五大錯誤開頭的全部內(nèi)容，希望對參加托?？荚嚨目忌兴鶐椭?，也希望同學(xué)在考試的時候多注意哦！

本文轉(zhuǎn)自《天之道零零七》的博客

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