2016年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文解析及范文
來(lái)源：新東方
2016-12-30 16:55
六級(jí)作文一般而言有三大評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，“語(yǔ)言”“結(jié)構(gòu)”“內(nèi)容”。今年的六級(jí)作文，不出意外，在形式結(jié)構(gòu)上考查了在六級(jí)強(qiáng)化班重點(diǎn)講解的“議論文”和“圖畫(huà)文”之一，即文字型話題。而內(nèi)容上考查的是“創(chuàng)新”相關(guān)話題，屬于個(gè)人精神品質(zhì)。
下面來(lái)具體解析：
Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation/creation/invention. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation/creation/invention. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
第一段：提出問(wèn)題，引出創(chuàng)新的話題
第二段：分析問(wèn)題，具體解析創(chuàng)新的原因，即創(chuàng)新的重要性
第三段：解決問(wèn)題，具體解析鼓勵(lì)創(chuàng)新的措施
先講解及格版作文思路：
第一段，可以仿寫(xiě)“社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)題”的首段寫(xiě)法，用一個(gè)with引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，作為大背景，進(jìn)一步轉(zhuǎn)到創(chuàng)新的話題。即 with the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
第一段，可以仿寫(xiě)“社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)題”的首段寫(xiě)法，用一個(gè)with引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，作為大背景，進(jìn)一步轉(zhuǎn)到創(chuàng)新的話題。即 with the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
第二段，按照課堂中所論證的總分結(jié)構(gòu)，可以從兩個(gè)或者三個(gè)層面論證為什么我們應(yīng)該創(chuàng)新，也就是創(chuàng)新的重要性。比如，個(gè)人，集體，社會(huì)。為了體現(xiàn)邏輯性，可以用相關(guān)連接詞連接。
具體如下：there are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. Secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. Thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.
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第三段：按照課堂中所論證的總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，可以從兩個(gè)層面論證我們應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)新，也就是鼓勵(lì)創(chuàng)新的措施。比如，個(gè)人，政府。連接詞依舊繼續(xù)。
具體如下：thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life.
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及格版作文
With the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
There are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. Secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. Thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.
Thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life. （151words）
With the rapid development of the society, more and more people begin to realize the importance of innovation. Such as, a lot of new things appear in our daily life.
There are many reasons for the importance of innovation. Firstly, for a person, if he has the spirit of innovation, he can be not satisfied with his current situation, and keep going until he succeeds. Secondly, for a team, creation can increase its efficiency. Thirdly, this kind of spirit can help the society develop faster and faster, so that there are more and more new things which can enrich our daily life.
Thus, it is very important for us to encourage innovation. On the one hand, we students should learn to be innovative in our daily life. On the other hand, governments could set some laws and regulations to encourage innovation. Only in this way can we have a better life. （151words）
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另附一篇高分作文賞析，結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容上類似，只是在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上更為精彩：
Along with the highly advanced society, the importance of innovation has been attached more and more significance in our country. There abound numerous novel gadgets in our daily life.
There exist countless contributors for this phenomenon mentioned above, while the following might be the most critical ones. To begin with, seen from the individual’s perspective, once equipped with innovation, he could be compelled to be never satisfied with his status quo, which guarantees his personal success. Apart from that, innovation is the main driving force behind increased competitiveness. To be the unrivaled one in the whole world, a nation has to keep abreast with time, ensuring the dominance of creation.
To put all into a nutshell, it goes without saying that innovation does matter. On the one hand, relevant authorities are supposed to set up relevant rules and regulations so as to highlight innovation. On the other hand, we each individual should cultivate this kind of viewpoint since our childhood, by which means we could be bestowed with a bright and promising future! (175words)
There exist countless contributors for this phenomenon mentioned above, while the following might be the most critical ones. To begin with, seen from the individual’s perspective, once equipped with innovation, he could be compelled to be never satisfied with his status quo, which guarantees his personal success. Apart from that, innovation is the main driving force behind increased competitiveness. To be the unrivaled one in the whole world, a nation has to keep abreast with time, ensuring the dominance of creation.
To put all into a nutshell, it goes without saying that innovation does matter. On the one hand, relevant authorities are supposed to set up relevant rules and regulations so as to highlight innovation. On the other hand, we each individual should cultivate this kind of viewpoint since our childhood, by which means we could be bestowed with a bright and promising future! (175words)