2013年6月英語六級作文高分版

Keep Our Hearts Strong

As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone. Good habits help pave our way to success. However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us. Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success.

In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined. A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society. Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust. In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits. We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment. Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence.

In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations. With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.

【點評】：
本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的習(xí)慣源自抵制誘惑”，這一諺語為話題發(fā)表議論，在寫作時需要對諺語的寓意進行闡釋，并且表達自己的觀點和看法，相比更為常見的話題型和觀點型作文題來說，有一定的難度。首先要求能夠?qū)χV語進行準確的理解，抓住諺語表達的中心意思，明確的提出觀點，然后圍繞這個意思進行闡述。所以在寫作時需要強調(diào)抵制誘惑對于保持或者培養(yǎng)良好習(xí)慣的重要性，以這一論點進行展開闡述，注意行文的邏輯性和語言的準確、流暢。

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