1. This ain't a one-man deal, kid. You need to wise up and get yourself a good crew chief and a good team.

【翻譯】這不是獨(dú)角戲啊，孩子。你要放聰明點(diǎn)，給自己找一個(gè)一流的總機(jī)師和伙伴。

strawdog童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Yeah, excellent! Nice work. Take a quick look at the "L" sound though, in words like "deal" and "yourself". The "L" sound is made by using the tip of your tongue to put pressure on the back of your top front row of teeth. Strong "L" sounds are really important in natural, native speech.

（“L”的發(fā)音很重要，大家注意要把舌尖放在上排牙齒的后面發(fā)音。）

2. If some one loves a flower, of which just one single blossom grows in all the millions and millions of stars, it is enough to make him happy just to look at the stars.

【翻譯】如果有人愛上了在這億萬顆星星中獨(dú)一無二的一株花，當(dāng)他看著這些星星的時(shí)候，這就足以使他感到幸福。

janie1225童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Excellent work! That was perfect! If I could give you six stars, I would. Now you can work on speeding it up and making it more conversational.

（鼓掌~灰常好的作品。可以加快些語速，更自然地運(yùn)用到對(duì)話中去。）

3. Don't ever let somebody tell you, you can't do something. Not even me.

【翻譯】別讓別人告訴你，你成不了才。即使是我也不行。

vanlentz童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng):

（很不錯(cuò)的作品哦~Alison老師的建議是可以嘗試不同的語音語調(diào)，增加些個(gè)性的東東~）

4. You got a dream, you gotta protect it. People can't do something themselves, they wanna tell you you can't do it. If you want something, go get it. Period.

【翻譯】如果你有夢(mèng)想的話，就要去捍衛(wèi)它。那些一事無成的人，想告訴你你也成不了大器。如果你有理想的話，就要去努力實(shí)現(xiàn)，就這樣。

LukeJS童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Excellent work. :) I think the "L" sound is still bothering you though, especially on the word "tell". Practice making strong and weak "L" sounds with your tongue. The stronger the pressure of your tongue, the stronger the "L" sound. Remember that your tongue is pressing on the back of your top front teeth.

（這個(gè)也是“L”的發(fā)音問題，大家千萬記住發(fā)音時(shí)用舌尖抵上排牙齒，再放開。）

5. He said l would have to accept myself, my warts and all, and that we don't get to choose our warts. They are a part of us and we have to live with them.

【原句】他說我將不得不接受我自己，包括缺點(diǎn)以及一切，我們無法選擇自身的缺點(diǎn)，他們是我們的一部分，我們只能接納。

rock_jy童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng)：

（介位童鞋要注意的是“we have”的讀法，建議兩個(gè)單詞分開讀，盡量讀得清晰些哦~）

6. Great Halloween, everybody. I believe it was our most horrible yet. Thank you, everyone.

【翻譯】偉大的萬圣節(jié)。這是我們表現(xiàn)最恐怖的一次。謝謝大家。

エイシュン君童鞋的作品：

Alison老師的點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Well your pronunciation was perfect! Now you can work on saying it a little bit faster, at a more conversational speed. You never want it to sound like you're reading something. :)

（對(duì)于發(fā)音不錯(cuò)的童鞋來說，下面要做的就是加快語速，不要聽起來像是在讀神馬，自然些~）

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