條理

保證不跑題是寫作當(dāng)中第一重要任務(wù),第二個(gè)重要任務(wù)就是條理清楚。對(duì)于議論文來(lái)說(shuō),正反面要清楚。對(duì)于說(shuō)明文來(lái)說(shuō),1、2、3條要清楚,對(duì)于描述文要來(lái), 誰(shuí)干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health來(lái)說(shuō),第一段保持正反面要清楚就應(yīng)這樣寫:主題句(It is very important to have good health.,正面(With good health, we can...),反面(Without good health, we can do nothing. We can't do...)

第二段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫:主題句(There are four ways to keep fit.) 從幾方面說(shuō)明: Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should have a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to the music....)

為了使文章更具關(guān)于條理性,我們可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副詞,他們可以使文章的條理性十分突出。作文是主 觀性題,要想得高分我們必須把評(píng)卷老師考慮進(jìn)去。評(píng)卷老師的時(shí)間很短(每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完),所以我們?cè)诹袟l條時(shí)最好不用:To begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At last ...。因?yàn)橛眠@樣的詞語(yǔ)不利于閱卷老師看出你作文的條理性。

第三段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫:主題句(My own practices are the following.)具體情況(主語(yǔ)為第一人稱代詞I,與第二段呼應(yīng)) In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen to the classic music.

綜上所述,如果我們按以上幾節(jié)的方法去做,就可以保證及格以上分?jǐn)?shù)。