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II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.

上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：
1. 簡述你寫信的目的及你對(duì)場所的選擇；?
2. 說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對(duì)這兩個(gè)場所進(jìn)行對(duì)比）

To whom it may concern:

I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.
Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

Wang Min

解析：
總評(píng)：
本次高考題目以書信的方式考查觀點(diǎn)論述的表達(dá)，屬于常見題型。題目要求中交待了背景，同時(shí)，題目還明確要求了書信的內(nèi)容中要包括目的、觀點(diǎn)、理由等方面，難度適中。

細(xì)評(píng)：
本次高考作文考查觀點(diǎn)論述，題型較為常見，要求對(duì)畫展的展出場所做出選擇，并且說明理由，而且已經(jīng)提示了可以從便利性和專業(yè)性兩個(gè)角度來分析，難度不算太大，要寫好這篇作文，只要觀點(diǎn)明確并且言之有理即可。
范文按照書信的形式，首先要提出給收信人，To whom it may concern這里表示的是敬啟者，是在讀者身份不明時(shí)用在信件、通知和證明書開頭的套語，也是除了Dear xxx之外英語書信的常見用語。
信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且表明了些這封信的目的。
第二段明確提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，用了it is more advisable to do...句型，表明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出建議時(shí)。段落最后用My reasons are as follows.“我的理由如下”作為一個(gè)過渡句引出下面的理由論述。
第三、四段用on one hand... on the other hand... “一方面……；另一方面……”進(jìn)行連接，層次清楚。在論述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)連詞的使用可以使邏輯顯得更清晰。第三段從便利性角度進(jìn)行分析，博物館交通更便利而且環(huán)境更舒適，其中用到了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句。第四段從專業(yè)性角度說明博物館的優(yōu)勢。
最后一段用therefore簡單總結(jié)并重申自己的觀點(diǎn)。
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