2011高考英語(yǔ)真題（上海卷）作文

II．Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是啟明中學(xué)（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申請(qǐng)一個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。根據(jù)以下啟事，寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信（信中不能提到真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）。

作者：陸佳偉 （上海延安中學(xué)教師? 牛津大學(xué)語(yǔ)言學(xué)碩士）

范文：

Dear World Child Foundation organizers，

My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.

Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so that we wouldn’t end up embarrassing those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.

At the end of the day, our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?

We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours Sincerely,

Jerry Lu

使用加分語(yǔ)法：
1. 同位語(yǔ)???? 2. v-ing作定語(yǔ)????? 3. 插入語(yǔ)
4. 詞組如：in a bid to, financially disadvantaged，on this account, oblivion to
5. 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)???? 6. v-ing作主語(yǔ) ???? 7. 定語(yǔ)從句
8. it作形式主語(yǔ)的主語(yǔ)從句???????? 9. 虛擬語(yǔ)氣
10. 目的狀語(yǔ)從句????? 11. 倒裝句??????????? 12. 賓語(yǔ)從句